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Poem in class writing

What are you doing and why? My group is doing a performance on the poem Boy and Egg. I chose to do this poem because I felt like it was something that I could relate to in parts and that would help me to write about the topic better. What aspects of the poem will you highlight in your performance? Some aspects of this poem that I will highlight in my performance are how much this egg really means to him and how the bigger kids in the poem did not include him in the games they were playing.

Boy and Egg

Thomas Fox Me. Guarino  B period  Literature  In the poem Boy and Egg I interpreted it as a story of a young boy entertaining himself in his own ways when other children would not include him in certain things, like the games they would play. It also showed how the small boy really wanted to play with the bigger kids. The emotion in this story is sadness and loneliness, some lines in this poem that lead me to believe this includes the line “while the other children laughed and ran with a ball, leaving him”. As you read this line it makes you wonder why this young man was excluded from the games that the other kids were playing. Most likely for not a good reason. The next line explains “so little, to forgetful in games, ready to cry if the ball brushed him”. Even though these are reasons that he was not allowed to play in the game they are not valid because all of them are not important to having fun and even if he wasn’t as good as the other kids or so much smal...

flaws and sins final reflection

I think my final draft turned out well. At first I didn't have much of the information that I have now. I would try to explain the artists feelings but it was a bit hard to explain. I found it difficult to figure out much to write about this song in the beginning of the project. Some of my strengths/what was easy on the final essay I would say is actually writing about this topic in general, this is because I chose my favorite song and I don't mind sitting and writing about it If I could work more on my essay I would use better grammar to make the reader understand it better and not have it be as choppy. 3 things on the rubric I may get top points on is 1 having it in on time, 2 having 500-600 words and 3 quotes are discussed and analyzed in body paragraphs. 3 things I may lose points on is 1 having endings for body paragraphs 2 thesis is specific and 3 creative title

Flaws+Sins Final

Tom Fox  B Period  Lit & Perf. 10/9/19 I chose this song flaws and sins by Juice Wrld because it makes me think about how it is alright for everyone to depend on certain people or a certain person in their life. The song also makes the listener feel the different emotions that the song offered all the way throughout the performance. The emotions felt are different at different parts in the song. The very pronounced emotions that I felt in this song are along the lines of happiness and sadness. Even though happiness and sadness are very different emotions Juice Wrld does a very good job in letting you feel these different emotions throughout the song. For example, one of the opening lines from the song is "your the lightning I'm the thunder there's a difference between I need you and I want you girl I need you." This poetically describes the way that Juice Wrld feels towards this girl. The emotions that I link with this song the most is both sadness an...

flaws+sins Tom Fox

Tom Fox  B Period  Lit & Perf. 10/9/19 I chose this song flaws and sins by Juice Wrld because it makes me think about how it is alright for everyone to depend on certain people or a certain person in their life. The song also makes the listener feel the different emotions that the song offered all the way throughout the performance. The emotions felt are different at different parts in the song. The very pronounced emotions that I felt in this song are along the lines of happiness and sadness. Even though happiness and sadness are very different emotions Juice Wrld does a very good job in letting you feel these different emotions throughout the song. For example, one of the opening lines from the song is "your the lightning I'm the thunder there's a difference between I need you and I want you girl I need you." This poetically describes the way that Juice Wrld feels towards this girl. The emotions that I link with this song the most is both sadness ...

Flaws and Sins

Tom Fox  B Period  Lit & Perf. 10/7/19 I chose this song flaws and sins by Juice Wrld because it makes me think about how everyone can need to depend on certain people. The song also makes the listener feel the different emotions that the song offered all the way throughout the performance.  for example one of the opening lines from the song is "your the lightning I'm the thunder there's a difference between I need you and I want you girl I need you." This poetically describes the way that Juice Wrld feels towards this girl. The emotions that I link with this song the most is sadness and happiness. And even though they are complete opposites I feel like at different parts throughout the song you can feel each of these emotions multiple times. Like the line " I see light in all the darkness" perfectly states this saying even though things are not 100% good all the time this girl that he loves lets him see the bright side of things.    He also tal...

song response

Tom Fox  B Period  Lit & Perf. 10/7/19 I chose this song flaws and sins by Juice Wrld because it makes me think about how everyone can need to depend on certain people. The song also makes the listener feel the different emotions that the song offered all the way throughout the performance.  for example one of the opening lines from the song is "your the lightning I'm the thunder there's a difference between I need you and I want you girl I need you." This poetically describes the way that Juice Wrld feels towards this girl. The emotions that I link with this song the most is sadness and happiness. And even though they are complete opposites I feel like at different parts throughout the song you can feel each of these emotions multiple times. Like the line " I see light in all the darkness" perfectly states this saying even though things are not 100% good all the time this girl that he loves lets him see the bright side of things.   

Song lyrics

You work numbers, work wonders You done woke me up from my eternal slumber I'm the lightening, you're the thunder There's a difference between "I need you" and "I want you" Girl, I need you Good sex led to conversations Gettin' a little deeper, uh Tell me your darkest secret shit you wouldn't even tell Jesus Uh, our karma been tweakin' so much, I don't even believe in karma But you give me a reason to thank God for all these recent falls Percocet thirty-eight I been gettin' off I done chilled out on the drugs since you been involved Suck it like it's love F me like it's love No protection on my heart Goddammit, I'm gon' hit it raw Traumatized from my past, yeah, I keep a log In my mind, in my head, where that s belong They say you after my bread, s , I hope they wrong You already ran up the bands, we can have a ball Hit her from the back, I'm in her I call a play, huddle up This that good l...

Poem performance

I thought that my groups overall performance was pretty good. One thing that we struggled with was staying with an original plan during the performance. However memorizing the part was a lot easier to do than I thought it would be. Another thing that turned out pretty well was the music fit really well to the feel that we were trying to put out with our performance. https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=6WUcU2tY9Eo&feature=youtu.be