flaws and sins final reflection
I think my final draft turned out well.
At first I didn't have much of the information that I have now. I would try to explain the artists feelings but it was a bit hard to explain.
I found it difficult to figure out much to write about this song in the beginning of the project.
Some of my strengths/what was easy on the final essay I would say is actually writing about this topic in general, this is because I chose my favorite song and I don't mind sitting and writing about it
If I could work more on my essay I would use better grammar to make the reader understand it better and not have it be as choppy.
3 things on the rubric I may get top points on is 1 having it in on time, 2 having 500-600 words and 3 quotes are discussed and analyzed in body paragraphs.
3 things I may lose points on is 1 having endings for body paragraphs 2 thesis is specific and 3 creative title
At first I didn't have much of the information that I have now. I would try to explain the artists feelings but it was a bit hard to explain.
I found it difficult to figure out much to write about this song in the beginning of the project.
Some of my strengths/what was easy on the final essay I would say is actually writing about this topic in general, this is because I chose my favorite song and I don't mind sitting and writing about it
If I could work more on my essay I would use better grammar to make the reader understand it better and not have it be as choppy.
3 things on the rubric I may get top points on is 1 having it in on time, 2 having 500-600 words and 3 quotes are discussed and analyzed in body paragraphs.
3 things I may lose points on is 1 having endings for body paragraphs 2 thesis is specific and 3 creative title
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